A. Oryginał (rambling)
“So, about the update, I kind of wanted to mention that there are a lot of moving parts and, you know, it’s been a bit tricky to get everyone aligned, which is understandable, and maybe we could just circle back later because I’m not entirely sure about the exact numbers yet, though I think they’re mostly fine…”
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- Point: jedna, jasna teza.
- Reason: czemu teraz.
- Example: 1 konkret (liczba/termin/prośba).
C. Self-check
- Brak dygresji / off-topic.
- 1 główna teza, 1 powód, 1 przykład.
- Zwięzłe, spokojne tempo (no monotone).
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